Thursday, October 30, 2008

animal farm

although animal farm is a good the being but now its worse then worse. Animal farm is a poor story because everyone wined up dieing in the end or dies from starvation and being slaughtered. in animal animal farm, the way characters to the stories has a strong ability of survie. first squealer loves to twist his stories. next squealer steals extra food. the milk and the apples go missing from the shack.

then the animals found out that squealer stole the extra food and he said "we need the extra food its our brain power". next squealer twists his away around that to. some of the animals notice that squealer and Napoleon are sleeping in beds. "squealer told the animals that the commandment is no sleeping in sheets we were not sleeping in sheets we were sleeping on straw." finally squealer is now living the life. squealer is now sleeping in a bed just like a human he is now no more a pig his has transformed into a human. squealer was fat and rich in the end he had anything his heart desired.

first boxer believes all of the pigs stories. next is boxer always believe Napoleon was always right. boxer always said "Napoleon is always right"he went around always saying that. boxer had his heart set on a retirement because he is so old. next boxer knew that he knew Napoleon was all good. boxer would also say "work hared" as a chant. boxer worked this hard to improve and be one of Napoleon pets. finally boxer thought he was going to a retirement home. boxer thought he was going to a retirement. boxer actually gotten sold to a glue factory. boxer always believe that Napoleon was good.

first benjamen nose that napolen is lieing. next ben noes his lieing and dosent want to say anything. ben always said "a donkey lives a long time". ben noes what napolen is doing he doesnt want to say anything because his scared. next ben can read and right so that means he noes the commandments. ben knew the commandments were falling one by one front the start . ben hated the way they lived when people are diening from starvation. next ben knew that snowball did no harm to the windmill. bem knew that snowball didnt knock thta over he knew that the weather did it. ben died from starvation and cared but didnt car enough to do anything. in animal farm the characters fate lies in their own belifes in realation to the story. squealer maniplates the stories for his own sate. boxer beleives the stories so he gets a once retirement. ben keeps quite so he dont die. animal farm realates to a old russian story where people died for no reason just like this story.

1 comment:

Constitution Melville said...

Some great ideas here Ashley and a few very good quotes.

However, your essay needs better organization. Follow your outline! Don't bring up a new point until you have finished the old one. Make sure each point has two red sentence (pieces of evidence) after it. Also, please separate each paragraph with an empty line. Also, make sure you have your facts straight. Squealer doesn't die and neither does Benjamin. Boxer never gets to retire.